Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Book Of My Life …. [very Short; Aging; Personal; Ph-Inspired] Comments

Rating: 4.5

My Bird-of-Youth has flown the coop.
No longer do I soar and swoop.
It's time now for the Bird-of-Old-Age.
The book's not done; I just turned the page.
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Bri Edwards
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Amitava Sur 19 September 2014

In short, very neatly you expressed the transformation of life, liked it a lot. Thank you... Amitava

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Ging Taping 04 September 2014

We all grow old..no exemption to the rule.. But we can slow down the process of aging.. Stay happy Sir...keep writing :)

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Valsa George 29 August 2014

The passing of age is so succinctly put in this miniscule of a poem! Yes, the book is not done, but some pages have been turned! Many more chapters remain to be completed! Enjoyed!

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Akhtar Jawad 26 August 2014

The bird of youth when breaks the coop and flies away leaves behind memories and experience to turn a page once more but with a brighter light of wisdom. A great poem Bri.

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Savita Tyagi 26 August 2014

Good one. The whole book of life set in there.

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