Book Of Life Comments

Good poem from an artist.Find the Book of Life The book published when the costs were low A child born of a happy wedding. It was a cheap paperback edition Third in the line preceding two more. Title page neat, handy with pleasing appearance Healthy, active, sober and modest. A run-of-the mill social novel sans sensational passages Cultured, devoid of violence and vulgarity. Printing indifferent pages dog-eared and blurred Uncared for, yet doggedly pursued reading hard. Theme gripping movement slow but steady. Crossing sixty encounters road blocks insurmountable. When anxious to reach the happy ending Speed breakers emerge off-spring accusing obstruct passage. Readers baffled, perhaps author perplexed (bungled) Unable to close the narrative finds unnatural ending inauspicious. The style and language dissipate grip loosens Wavering, the author blamed for erratic writing. Oh! book! ending lost in torn pages Life ends without the knowledge of what happens to its creation. following lines which complement the poem:

Very nice poem. Well depiction of life and appealing. Keep it up.

Make this book as appealing as possible Make this book clear and simple, anyone could handle Well done..Kavita. TO