Book Comments

Pathos and grief unmistakable in your lines, but hope looms large as you whirl though. Take care of typos. arya

Consider revising your poem and see if you like it. poetry is about condensing your thoughts in a few lines to make beautiful sense. Book let me speak to you, all the secrets within. worry, hope, love and dreams are in me. (but) forgotten i am, tossed aside. i am the world you can escape to. a world you can see. so, make me what i am. make me remembered. forget all and come to me. here you are free. trust in me, here you are free. i am the world you can escape to. a world where you are free. elenore elizabeth keep writing.

'I Am The Only World You Can Escape To.' I Love This Line Lovley. And Fulll Of Grace I Can Just Imagine Someonne Hiding Needing A Place To Stay