(book # 4) : Sheila And Clifford : Sh. And Cl. And Violet And Ike ..... [love & Sex; Continuation Of 3 Previous Long Poems] Comments

Bri, his is taking some amazing turns. Well, Sheila, after raising it in a previous book, seems no longer to care about Clifford being an intellectual. There are tigers (metaphorical? ? Or, are they literal?) and beds and stilted conversations. This is beginning to run like a David Lynch film. Should I be expecting the taciturn cowboy to make an entrance? ? I'm looking forward to more....! !

Chickened out! Very exciting build up. Vi sounds a bit like those teenage girls who man or rather woman-handled a mate of mine who was an Electrician. He was on some steps fixing a new light when two pairs of hands gave his masterpiece an intense fondling. He said he coolly carried on working. Liar! Can't wait to read part 5. No doubt there'll be an inquest! Tom.

It goes deeper and deeper Bri, ....It's like watching TV series (teleserye)

i have chapter 21 written. i hope someone, at least, will read it and appreciate it in the next poem. i have enjoyed writing it. :) bri