Chapter 49
[Sheila Speaks]:
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Sheila and Clifford going in the family way.My best wishes! !
Now you got a new beginning for life. After all every thing goes in cycle. This new phase of life for Sheila would be challenging and I am sure Bri's words can make it exciting.
THE FOUR COMMENTS below, BEFORE THIS ONE FROM ME, were left when Sheila and Clifford were 'still dead'. :) bri i shall send those four readers the rest of it now, or notice that it is available.
I had read some of those chapters but always read more of your other poems. But this ending is surprising. Not in Bri's style. Come on! Put some spark in it. Bri's style! May be not me but I am sure you have many others enjoying the sequel! Hope you are doing well!
Savita, you write/type/say 'I am sure you have many others enjoying the sequel! ' OK! ! !
(CONT.) .....After a multi-year hiatus, I will write more of Sheila & Clifford's life, as I have time on my hands, time on my mate's PC, and the poetic inclination to please. : ) bri
Does it have previous chapters.... I am curious to know! I enjoyed reading this one! You shouldn't have killed them for lack of reader response....! Many would have been reading their poems, but might not have been posting any comments either because they were lazy to do so, or it could be out of jealousy!
Bri, What can I say....that ending was abrupt. And sudden. And unexpected. Too sudden. Mark Twain once said something about remarks made about his own death. I hope that Cliff and Sheila will be able to utter similar words.
Mark, I've read of the supposedly printed-in-the-news report ot the death of the great American author Mark Twain aka Samuel Clemens. In fact it was a falsehood, his death. : )
A lack of readers interest kills the spirit of the poet to write.I hope, those who read poems should try to give as many comments as possible.Even when a poem is read, if there is no comment the poet can not usually know that it has been read and appreciated by the readers.Thanks Bri Edward for being a good reader and critic besides being a good poet.
I see...when I returned to this, I stopped reading right after the first part. I just assumed that was the end...the end of Clifford and Sheila. Now I see there is in fact a new beginning....the promise of new life. So there is the life cycle....from death, to birth! ! Sheila and Clifford rise! I look forward to more.....