Friday, March 20, 2015

(book# 10) : Sheila And Clifford: The Wedding... [wedding; Original Vows; Medium; Continuing Story; Fiction] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chapter 40
[Sheila speaks]:
When Cliff first visited my home, no one dared to ask:
“When will you get married? ” It looked as though it was MY task.
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Valentin Savin 19 March 2021

I really liked your poem. You did well writing it on behalf of a woman. Yes, you did. I understand that it's a fiction. But it seems that it was a tracing paper of one of your own marriages. Ha-ha-ha. Wedding vows are just great.

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Mj Lemon 24 May 2017

No shotgun and no wedding crashers....so many bullets dodged! I am looking forward to the next gripping installment.

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Tom Billsborough 05 August 2016

A Wedding without a hitch! Hooray! At least no-one turned up at the wrong church! Good story line Tom

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Lyn Paul 20 March 2015

Great work Bri.. Just loved it, I will look out for 11. I imagined you doing stand up comedy with this in your wedding suit. Maybe with a card board cutout next to you. The best is that it was a humble wedding. Love it? I do.....

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