(book # 1) : Sheila And Clifford: 'hello! ' ……. [new Relationship; Shyness; 'un-Shyness'; Very Long, But Very Good? ] Comments

WARNING! ! ! This may take OVER 10 minutes to read. ;) But (I think) it IS WORTH IT. : ) bri

There is MUCH MORE to enjoy of this continuing story. See 'Clifford and Sheila' in my poems. And it is NOT ALL ! There will be a marriage and a baby EVENTUALLY, but much more! ! bri ;)

Bri, This is shaping up to be a most excellent saga. I'll be continuing with the additional books. Must bookmark at the moment...but was wondering how you managed to catch the near Freudian slip with La mamba....? It reminds me of The Lady Eve. I shall return....Sheila and Clifford....Sid and Nancy....the saga is eternal!

Well, you've surprised me, Bri. You have a natural conversational style but poetic too. The rhymes are not obtrusive and the story is very interesting and funny. It sounds real too. My one prob; lem is that PH seems to be jerking itself off. Every time I start a new paragraph it shoots past it and then freezes! Can't be the computer! Will slow down my reads but really looking forward to Part 2. tomBillsborough

LOL, finished reading all 4 poems (16 chapters) already posted. A very interesting story and I'm looking forward to more. Darla :)

Found it, will read as time permits (so not today) . Darla :)

What is this, some kind of poetro-sexual porno-rhymo-filth? (I love it!) Didn't think you had it in you Bri-guy! Is this auto-dactyl-biographical? What happens next? Please, please, tell us!

Loved to read all over again...

i have written 3 new chapters after chapter 5. the public (well at least two of you) are calling out for MORE. sheila and clifford's 'relationship' will expand. but, due to some steamy content, i shall submit the new chapters as a new poem entitled More Sheila And Clifford. bon appetite! bri :)

I will continue to check your page regularly to keep reading your new posts. Thumbs up.

I enjoyed reading Bri, please continue...I know this is not the ending.I want more to read.. You can submit this to WATTPAD..

I agree with Points of View all that is missing is some popcorn. I can't wait to read more :)

Yes their meeting of minds was disappointing! (Just in answer to your quote!)

Very vivid poem with great rhythm. Enjoying all the conversation. Which way bar hopping would take them hard to tell.

Next Chapter please Bri! ....I can't wait to read the ending...I guess I need a large pack of Popcorn and a pitcher of coke.....two thumbs up!

Story going good. Time for meeting of minds now!

I can't wait to read part 2. I like these two characters Clifford and Sheila, let's see what happens next! :)

So far so good. suspense building up! Like the rhyme too.