Sunday, August 17, 2008

Boogeyman Comments

Rating: 3.0

Inspired by the movie 'Boogeyman 2'.

Darkness falls
And she stays up,
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Yami Tenshi
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 August 2008

This is perhaps a little too simple a poem. It was very clear in meaning but the purpose was not as clear for the poem. The creativity also needed work. GW62

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Subham Dutta 18 August 2008

Hi Yami Tenshi, I like this type of writeing.

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