Booby Trap Comments

A very sensible and powerful piece.....despite all such explosives life continues till the end being trapped in and out............excellent sir

awesome write..............That we are trapped and caged in.................

We don't know what life will do now, today tomorrow.Still, we love to live.This is the mystery.I loved the novelty of expression too.

Like the glamorous actress who may in reality be a state of turmoil we also see a comedian or a clown who makes everybody laugh but no one sees the inner feelings. Turmoil may be hidden as in volcano ready to erupt any time. Beautiful poem providing a timely warning. Thank you.

life is a learning experience. every day we learn more. sometimes it really is a booby trap. excellent write

What a beautiful way to explain life! Life wrapped in a beautiful parcel. Yet knowingly we have to move on with concealed explosive! ! We trapped and helpless...We can count our fulfilled wishes. Unfulfilled wishes are many. One fact of life is very few are happy, as nothing is steady. A moment you are happy, next moment you are crashed. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

A careful and thoughtful imagery of life.

You have employed a powerful imagery here.... a booby trap that may detonate any time we least expect and burn us! Yes, some unprecedented misfortunes in life make us to believe like that! I can understand why you feel so! But we cannot live in fear all the time. Let us adopt an attitude 'Come what may'! A 10 for this powerful write!

Amitava, I thoroughly enjoyed your imagery of life, you have put it in an unusual perspective indeed, which makes it all the more enticing. Alas, when we do leave this life behind, we also leave it unfulfilled, our purposes undefined and never realized, it is true. Life is a trap that we are borne into without being given a choice whether we even want to be here or not. We make the best of it through misery and pain to attain what we think we want from it. In the end it is like a booby trap that tends to explode without our knowing it was a concealed explosive. Thank you Amitava, RoseAnn