Monday, May 12, 2008

Bonsai Comments

Rating: 4.4

Pleasure enclosed noon on a table
A magnolia-soul from opposite chair
Puts on elegant dress
Like a blooming melody dancing on.
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Chris Blazo 20 August 2012

I like the imagery in this one. Especially looking through the window into a night's sky!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 June 2009

Bonsai is a living image of endless dream i like the poem especialy this line. shan 10

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Brishti Mazumdar 05 June 2009

Ashraful, You poetries paint some lines of thought with very few words and your enviable thought process...Again 10++...Brishti Mazumdar

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Saadat Tahir 03 June 2009

a beautiful poem for a superb hobby...nay way of life bonsai is not something you just get up an do....it grows with you inside ur herat an thats why its so small an endearing beautiful; poemsir ill gladly give it ten and get some tips too cheers

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Naidz Ladia 26 May 2009

beautiful expressions to a bonsai..a small but terrible..naizz

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Ben Gieske 08 May 2009

I like the images you have chosen - very delightful. Pleasure enclosed noon on a table A magnolia-soul from opposite chair Puts on elegant dress Like a blooming melody dancing on.

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Anjali Sinha 07 May 2009

neat and elegant the navy blue sky is smiling -10 anjali

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Reshma Ramesh 05 October 2008

thought provoking.............well done

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premji premji 03 October 2008

trees are grown like bonsai... imagine a world where elephants are grown like bonsai animals... how cruel it will be!

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C T Heart 01 October 2008

mind stirring piece sir...deep thoughts to share forth...Great.

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Clum Haire 20 September 2008

Hey thanks for your comment, thought I'd comment back. I really like this poem, its confusing and wonderful. At first if I'm honest, I hadn't a clue what was happening but I reread it and it clicked into place which is really cool. Its boring to have obvious poems right. I'd give it a 10.

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Martin Swords 19 September 2008

love A4 blue sky through window. see The Ballad of Reading Gaol by Oscar Wilde for another poem about that little patch of blue sky. Best Wishes and Thank You

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Shimon Weinroth 12 September 2008

lovely majestic metaphors

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Bob Blackwell 11 September 2008

Ashraful, you have painted a minature of life so beautifully. It is spring here and my own bonsai are coming to their best with lovely new light green clothes, but none are as beautiful as yours. Bob

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Fred Babbin 10 September 2008

The imagery here is very nice.

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Subham Dutta 03 September 2008

Sir, Khub bhalo kabita.

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Manonton Dalan 28 August 2008

bonsai pampered plant through deprivation. a master piece of wires and scissors. hmmmmm... magnolia could be your princess. thanks for sharing.

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Onelia Avelar 26 August 2008

Bonsai is your living image of endless dream obviously. Another one little wonder.

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Ashraful Musaddeq

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