Bonsai Comments

Thanks for comments and review. I will try to improve upon it.

lovely one but if i say one negative point of the piece that would be that the narration is lacking a kick or punch and that is too flat.......

Just as the bonsai arrests our attention your poem is arresting and lovely, Jasmeen!

This poem is a bonsai of your description! A beauty in miniature, a dwarf in stature and bejewelled with rubies ablaze! ! A truely great poem! ! Thank you for your sweet comment and your interpretation of my poem in all dimensions intended! !

a concentrated piece...beautiful!

every word chosen is shining, Rests on a sill, Kissed by sun//The work of artifice, That rests in a pot skilfully crafted with the meaning deep than

An exquisitely crafted poem. Do coment mine too.