He is walking and talking…
And cursing his shadow!
He has lost his job
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Antoine Domino ~ Domino Effect [DE] ~ Rhythm and Blues ~ Actually he succumbed to/for DE… though sad…still poetically very valid and valuable…and viable to be kept in memory vial for what drug can do...helps to escape from reality…… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
What the catastrophe life has brought to him! Tug of war of existence. May it be natural, sometimes unavoidable....but the narrator penned the inner-reality very skillfully and wisely. Well-written pains of defeat. Well-written variations of winning agony which makes the reader somehow shocked at the moment when poem stops. Good poem. Social consciousness and the humanic sense of the poet is also appreciating which gives a poem universality. Thank you very much. Regards, 10+ pranab
It is sad how he had to go through all this, sad until the very end. I hope he found happyness somewhere beyond
He was nt responsible, dnt c d light n wen he lost his job, his conscience dropp dead on him, he ran mad, there was 1solution, to take his.he probably took drugs coz the presure was to much, he thought he could handle it, bt then he became lost.nice poem.nice thumbz up.
its makes me sad that he was struggling. but then strong because he took his own life.
Great great depth in this poem............