Tuesday, August 30, 2005

Bonfire Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

How eager are the children as they look up into the sky,
Reacting to a theatre of sound, colour and light,
A euphoria of expectation, the holding of breath,
The lighting of the bonfire, on top sits the awesome guy,
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Ernestine Northover
COMMENTS
Patricia Gale 19 April 2008

Wonderful..... nothing like a bonfire. I enjoyed the imagery in this one.

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Andrew Blakemore 16 March 2008

Memories of childhood bonfire nights came flooding back reading this. Lovely poem. Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 27 February 2006

Dear Ernestine, from start to finish, this was beautiful and I could watch the display before my minds eye.Brilliant.Love Duncan

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Simon Whild 22 October 2005

It took me back to when I was a boy. All the excitement, sounds and colours. Not to mention the baked potatoes and butter! A lovely poem.

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zip zap 19 September 2005

i could almost smellthe smoke. nice work! -ps

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Mary Nagy 04 September 2005

Great poem Ernestine. The visuals here had me feeling the heat from the fire myself. Sincerely, Mary

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