Friday, November 2, 2018

Bonfire Night: Fireworks! Comments

Rating: 5.0

On Bonfire Night, a thousand bright lights
Explode in November's autumnal skies:
Moon Shadow, Crackling Glitter, Comet Bomb;
Deadly Dragon, Pearl Shots and Flaming Sun;
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Shaun Cronick 29 June 2020

I can feel the heat emanating from your colourful and well written poem. A full score for writing and imagineering a splendid poem Dominic. Many thanks and take care.

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Mihaela Pirjol 08 October 2019

This is such a vividly described event that one can almost feel the intensity, the colour, the enthusiasm, the magic of the Bonfire Night!

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Dominic Windram 09 October 2019

Thanks Milhaela...I wrote it for my nieces and nephew a few years ago. They love to hear me read it to them every November 5th...it will soon be upon us once again!

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Dominic Windram 09 October 2019

sorry that should have read Mihaela...apologies!

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Prabir Gayen 12 March 2019

Ver beautiful poem dear poet ❤ 💜

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 November 2018

Very nicely crafted poem on different colors and crackers that will fill the air with brightness and sound in this festive season. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Dominic Windram 03 November 2018

Thanks Anil..so grateful for your comments! .

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Chinedu Dike 02 November 2018

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Dominic.

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Dominic Windram 02 November 2018

Thanks for your kind comments Chinedu!

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Dave Walker 02 November 2018

It will soon be upon us, thousands of colours in the sky. A great poem.

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Dominic Windram 02 November 2018

Thanks Dave...much appreciated!

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