Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Bones Comments

Rating: 5.0

my bones layed down to rest,
my skin crawled underneath.
they told us we'd gone with the best,
they said it with so much grief.
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Ana Podarevska
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Alison Cassidy 04 April 2007

Ana, you give your reader just enough information to whet the appetite for more. There is something haunting about this piece - open to a myriad of interpretations. Perhaps a disaster, perhaps an experience in a hospital, or an hallucination... Yes, the poem flows in a lyrical style and the repetition works very well. An arresting piece. love, Allie xxxx

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Ana Podarevska

Ana Podarevska

Kherson, Ukraine
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