Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Bone Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was down on earth
Almost fearing a death
As the bang sound was heard
People thought I was dead
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

A realistic picture. Like a short story. Very nice UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kannur 670307 Feb 21,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

The poem has a remarkable quality of laughing the pain out besides being a strong metaphore in my opinion. Words are all placed ten-on-ten to emote concern and humour. An amazing write! Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Feb 20,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2014

Be careful. The pain has been expressed with an expression. meenas17, Malaysia Feb 20,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

welcome rohini daud a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

as long as it still works: _) earth ling11 hours ago life is all about the care we miss when not at notice:

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

okay Louis Minett5 minutes ago not bad.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

Alpa Suba likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

I was down on earth Almost fearing a death

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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