I was down on earth
Almost fearing a death
As the bang sound was heard
People thought I was dead
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The poem has a remarkable quality of laughing the pain out besides being a strong metaphore in my opinion. Words are all placed ten-on-ten to emote concern and humour. An amazing write! Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Feb 20,2014
Be careful. The pain has been expressed with an expression. meenas17, Malaysia Feb 20,2014
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as long as it still works: _) earth ling11 hours ago life is all about the care we miss when not at notice:
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A realistic picture. Like a short story. Very nice UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kannur 670307 Feb 21,2014