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Watch N’ Mind your Words…isn’t it? …if I’m right? Ms. Nivedita UK

hours spent together, lapsing into eternity, earth reborn for our tomorrows, that we spend more hours in love oh, this is beautiful, Eyan; i liked it a lot

nice thoughts i like the way it was written with you're thoughts

a exquisite piece of work......

theme sad and poignat...verses but sweet...a poem written in haste...yet carries the message to whom it's concerned...thanks...10

Great work of material. Elegant use of works and outstanding vocabulary. Well done.

Soft words soften the ice, Pleasurable moments, Plays on souls like harps Stories, told bridge all gaps From the furthest mountains, To the closest of leaves yes soft words are soothing.....i like your poem

Affection two hearts intimate moments you have spelt out love that can melt hearts luvli poem Eyan ++++10 regads

'Hours spent is the link, Tightening the golden chain Of two leaves on a branch' i like these lines much, the whole poem is short and sweet to read....

'Pleasurable moments, Plays on souls like harps' Simply sweetness and beauty. I love this poem!

hours spent is the link........10

I'm Not a critic, But since u asked for me to Read this, I will give My opinion.... Nice Thoughts Expressed Intricately enough For me to Read it a couple of times and Leave me Impressed with the Imagery

its a lovely poem and with soft strong sentiments

Hi Eyan - Excellent poem in terms of structure and content - TEN. It is one of the most sensual poems i have read on PH. Soft Words - Pleasurable Moments - Stories - these are the things of love and life. 'Our minds flow with intimacy - Affections glue two hearts' BEAUTIFUL! Yours in poetry - JOHN

nice poem, could have more lines, but good, nice job

wow..... lovely....bonds, well penned....

I love it, know that when I spun around to pin the tail on the donkey I got so confused i stuck the pin in my jackass(self) Seriously thought one of the best you got a gift. i have a lot to email myself from school to post later, ummm yeah look for living in finite existance (my 0) A relative theory I find the bond of love sometimes has to be stronger between man and god to realize the true beauty of the wiman and her soul

Nice expression of the bond between two people. My favorite lines are: 'Hours spent is the link, Tightening the golden chain Of two leaves on a branch' Very well done!

'our minds flow with intimacy' is so very true.

Lovely and warm, words spoken in soft creating bonds and softening the frozen ice, melting the unwants..10