Wednesday, August 9, 2017

Bond Comments

Rating: 4.8

It's that bond

Going round around you
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Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar
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Jazib Kamalvi 09 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Lakshmi. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Thank you Jazib for expressing your view on my poem! I will surely read your poems.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2017

Wow! what a beautiful poem! Amusing deliction on family and life. Let it be quoted some lines... It's that bond you sink with it Go round and round with it Till you vanish in that pond With that bond! Many thanks dear Lakshmi, keep the ball rolling...10/10

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Thank you Mr Mahakul for supporting word and quoting your favorite line :)

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Rini Shibu 09 August 2017

Wonderful poem on family and bonding.. Thanks Lakshmi for sharing

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Thank you Rini for supporting line :)

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