Bonaparte Comments

You definitely captured this, however love games are very dangerous games to play.--Melvina--

i know this game. it's never fun, and no-one wins. lovely way to capture it all with words though. nice job.: -) Virginie

That's why we love them! And when you finally work it out and think you've captured her heart for sure, that's exactly when you'll lose it. It's the sweetest game. Great representative wordplay.Clever, clear and concise.

dump her and take me! just kidding, brian - i like how my tongue works when telling this one. great craft!

hey brian.. this is an interesting poem...cleverly penned... excellent! Asma...

Sounds like you have met your Waterloo... Poem has a catchy beat to it, liked it a lot, Brian

dump her! (only kiddin') it does describe the 'situation' wonderfully. al.

This is fine write - I especially admire your terseness and original imagery. The crafty Buonaparte specialised in appearing where he was not expected. A complex and haunting write. - Will

Understood. It's that situation that makes you feel like your blood flows both ways at once. Esra

Hi Brian, excellent.. very clever use of words and captures wonderfully the complications which relationships often bring...well done.

This one is a very creative and fun poem to read Brian. I love how you keep the comparisons related throughout your poem, that is hard to do! Great poem thank you

Ah! she really is a puzzle, isn't she? Nice poem! Sujata

So much love... this poem made me smile

Yes I think you are attracted to someone. You said in this poem. Funny kind of poem it is very unique. I like it very much. Take care.

The complexities of a female mind exposed - the frustration oozed out of this one Brian. Loved the strength of the rhyme and metre, seemed to echo the thoughts ticking over in the narrator's mind. Warmest wishes, Justine.

BRIAN...YOU ARE INDEED MOST TALENTED...THIS WORK IS AN EXAMPLE OF MY CLAIM...STRUCTURE, FLUX& FINE DESCRIPTORIAL S HIT THEIR MARK, , HEAD ON! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

Beautiful.. Absolutely, truly beautiful.. I sort of read this poem from the opposite perspective.. Being the tempest you speak of and feeling out your point of view. I really was entertained.. You captured so much.

She's changeable as weather, beautiful and compelling as a mystery. I love the way you expand the 'love is a game' metaphor. Warmly, Julia

Ms Bonaparte, you mean! ! Good, funny one.Relationships can be quizzical!

This was a really nice read Brian, a good use of words, a nice wide selection making it a worthwhile read. Love Ernestine XXX