Friday, October 31, 2008

Bon Voyage Verse Comments

Rating: ★4.8

Whistles the train
Boring a hole
Into the midriff of the still air.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . 02 September 2009

I like how the first stanza marries up with the fourth stanza. It has a fantastic flow and the second stanza has great alliteration and movement. 10 love Karin

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 August 2009

emotion..the scene..everything in a few lines...all of us pierce the air in our own strength

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Sherif Monem 28 July 2009

Nice quick poem.with short verses.

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Colin Jeffery 06 November 2008

This is a deep poem very well done.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Pakistan
Naseer Ahmed Nasir
Naseer Ahmed Nasir
Pakistan
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