Stopping by the drug store
she bought six-pack of drink,
took back to children, four,
and set it by the sink.
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A five star poem.But I wonder why such a beautiful poem has not yet been chosen Poem of the Day, though it has been there for ten years!
Using less and less plastic, segregating plastics from biodegradable substances and recycling the plastics can put less burden on environment.But who listens?
Bri says I had posted a comment here. But I am unable to find it! Anyways a beautiful poem, taking a sharp look at everyday human life. Not just the journey of the bottle. Great rhyme scheme. And inimitable Briite sarcasm.. Top score
Yes Bri, this is one of your best poems I have enjoyed reading every time I come across this poem.
thanks again. i just saw notice, in 'Notifications', of your repeat visit and comment. : )
A great poem --The plastic bottle made its continued journey towards San Fransisco Bay! Our carelessness may one day make a sea of plastics only and there will be no places for fish, snails or any other living being.A funny poem with a powerful message
this poem is a good one, man.it actually changed a life style today.
Took a lotta bottle to write this I suppose! ! ! ! ! ! Sorry just my little joke very little. As usual your upside down way of looking at the world pleases and delights once again. Another good poem that made me smile but had a more serious side thanks for sharing BB : O)
Hi Bri i like this saga about the bottle and its journey.I agree towards sounds better with San Fransisco
Stunning, FANTASTIC, SENSATIONAL, MIND-BLOWING, LIFE-CHANGING, BEYOND-WORDS, & NOT BAD to 'boot'! ! ! ! ! ! ***** And TO MY 'favorites'. : ) Read by a disinterested reader.