Afloat on the immensity
of waters rolling endlessly
Their huge canoes borne easily.
Their voyage was exploratory.
...
Read full text
Great rhythm Ivor with this one. A lovely story with lots of imagery. History in the making. Lovely read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Nice write Ivor! Getting a real education from your poems! A (10) ! ! Thad
The rhymes of your poem are as great as the story of the Maoris. Great write.