Sunday, October 28, 2007

Bon Voyage Comments

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Afloat on the immensity
of waters rolling endlessly
Their huge canoes borne easily.
Their voyage was exploratory.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
COMMENTS
Jemarie Ragudo 11 November 2007

The rhymes of your poem are as great as the story of the Maoris. Great write.

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Ernestine Northover 28 October 2007

Great rhythm Ivor with this one. A lovely story with lots of imagery. History in the making. Lovely read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 28 October 2007

Nice write Ivor! Getting a real education from your poems! A (10) ! ! Thad

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