Bon Voyage! Comments
Life has many contrasts,
Many twists and turns
Many unanswered questions,
Many unresolved mysteries.
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@Ruma Chaudhuri, Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments on my poem. Much appreciated!
This is life. The philosophy of life. Yet life goes on, ... this is the main words or the main tune of life. For this, perhaps it was said Charoibeti, meaning go ahead... and Vivekananda used to inspired our nation with the words of Upanishad, Utthistito jagroto prapto bannibodhoto.... rise..woke up..and fulfill your your goal. Excellent poem. I like it.
Feeling inspired again after reading your comment you had left here five years ago. Time flies!
Wonderful, in depth and understanding. A true inspired vision of what Life is. Your poem is so concise yet so enormous in Scope and Beauty. A Gem to be admired many times! 10/10
Thank you Sandra, for so kindly and generously commenting on my poem. Much inspired.
Life is moment's captured in our memory forever, but we can't go back and relive them! Beautiful, insightful write!
Thank you, dear poet @Hazel Durham, for your inspiring appreciation of the poem. I am much obliged. Just read your beautiful poem 'A Gloious Brightness'.
I can relate to this writing.It is s. Thank you so much! so true and honest. I love your writing
Thank you, @Kelley Collins, for reading my poem and appreciating it. That makes me so much inspired!
Thank you so much, @Leah Ayliffe, for your concise appraisal of the poem. Much inspired.
So fitting a title, to the poem. Life is a journey. This poem reminds me of 'you can't step in the same river twice'- Heraclitus.
Thanks, dear poet Sophy, for your inspiring comment. In a way, I can also relate to your quote. Thanks for quoting this famous line of Heraclitus.
Short and Beautiful poem.... Through twists and turns life goes on. All I can tell is Bon Voyage! ... Loved reading it.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here, after reading my poem, @Geetha Jayakumar. Much inspired by your praise of the poem.
Very nicely written, Life is like that only with full contrasts, but it does not stop also moves on to future. So Bon voyage and Carpediem - that I am to say
Yes, life goes on! Thanks for stopping by and read my poem. The appreciative words you left here after reading will long serve me as an inspiration, dear @Amitava Sur!
@Sandra Feldman Thank you very much for your poetic appreciation of my humble effort. As usual, you've been very kind to me. The beauty that lies beneath your eyes, was so generous to reflect itself when you read my poem!
So true, You can't go back, You can't go home again, No matter where, No matter when. Dear Poet, Bon Voyage speaks to me, I feel very close to your thoughts. Also, allow me to say that Bon Voyage, So well expressed, This is, without doubt, One of your best. So happy to see you writing again, Be well, be free, be happy Sandra
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8/2/2025 7:27:57 PM # 1.0.0
Life is difficult at times, betraying our trust, reneging on promises, yet we cling to life like a child to it's mother. Knowing we can never recapture what we had even moments before, just moving forward one step at a time.
Thank you for sharing your wisdom through these lines, Roseann. I am much inspired by your poetic thoughts. 'just moving forward one step at a time' - yes, that's just it!