:) :) ~ Bon Jour Me With Holi ~.. :) ... :) Comments

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Rainbow is painted on the canvas of profound blue nice poem

Very nice! The best of the holidays to you!

i liked the rainbowy vibgyor poetry smiliar to a painting!

A beautiful poem from the pen of a gifted poet

a colorful poem. beautiful

Beautiful. Well penned.

You sure are gonna make it! Your poem is lovely.

I played a colorful Holi with your poem..nice one.

Beautiful poem! I like the flow that transcends these lines. ~Besa

This is as colorful as holi is, your imagination took me to my yester years where colors wore us, and happiness found us giggling all the day....this is a sweet and stimulating poem and the velvetty romance comes through nicely

I've been away from PH for some time now and am gradually coming back. I loved the first lines, Nivetita, and the rendering of the rainbow, Vibgyor (which i knew as 'Roygbiv') But nothing compares to 'colorful euphony to encolor you'. The imagery is simply amazing...I have to learn from this

Thro’ your poetry I want to be soused in Rainbowy Vibgyor .........these lines are very beautiful like a statue. good thinking Niv. My best wishes.

Bonjour indeed Niv you are your own rainbow and the beauty is you can't drown a rainbow++++10..regards

Bon jour! This is good poem!

Fabulous writting. You know its holi today in india. Do u celebrate there holi?

while I thank you for this invitation to read your work I won't always have this opportunity to do so. But this one is very well penned indeed. God bless

In endless flowery grove Flood gate…of minstrel The key you please open….. so lovely dear

IT IS AS COLOURFUL AS HOLI.You are a poet of the likes of keats JVL NARASIMHARAO INDIA