Bon Apetite Comments

Writting Poetry awaits you.

What a feast! For all senses, and philosophical too. Bravo.

Your concept of the world is a wholesome one and your analogies are well chosen and expressed. I especially like the ending. We should all think and act like this.

Pouring out of the soul by a poetic genius. CP

i think old age is not such a bad thing though i have`nt experienced it obviously, anyway.i like the poem

This poem just danced in my mind, Irene! you are a marvel! It is going in my colection of favourite poems for my grandson, regards Bob

food for the soul, alimentation for the heart wonderful write