Saturday, December 19, 2015

Bombs Before Breakfast Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bombs before breakfast, blasts just at noon-
Hurry and sup, before we all swoon.
A leg flying by, we pretend not to see,
As we're remembering freedom's not free.
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Patti Masterman
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Bri Edwards 05 February 2016

well, Patti, in the 'greater scheme of things' (as i think someone else once said) ..........this doesn't matter. so go back to your pancakes and TV gab fest and DON'T WORRY ABOUT IT! BRI :) nice work. especially liked: Fingers on stairwells, crushed by a wall, Buildings much shorter that once were so tall. Children are silenced both early and late- Not from ​mere ​etiquette-​ no; ​ cruel hand of fate. ......................liked? well, you know what i mean, i hope. bri :) to MyPoemList

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Manonton Dalan 28 December 2015

very nice poem... I could imagine what are you saying if those happen in my neighborhood..it will be flatten.

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Smoky Hoss 21 December 2015

Very good poem Patti. Spot on.

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