Wednesday, June 11, 2014

Bolt In The Blue Comments

Rating: 5.0

A snow white crane floating freely with the wind
With her delight and freedom in her wings,
Crossing over the meadows and the green fields
Over the rivers, villages and rows of hills.
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 04 January 2015

Amitava, a very moving and heart touching poem, I see your double meaning and appreciate it's depth, such a compassionate man you are. Feeling the freedom of flying high and then being shot down by an arrow, then your amazing compassion taking and holding it so gingerly, trying to ease it's pain. A very beautiful poem with an enlightening message, deeply felt. Thank you Amitava for such a poignant and touching poem. RoseAnn

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Beach Girl 12 July 2014

A very intriguing poem, as it made me wonder if perhaps there was hidden meaning behind the words. Also the mental image you created of the bird flying freely over the land was very impressive. I enjoyed this!

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A bolt in the blue is just like a bolt from the blue...........no one knows a sudden and unforeseen event that might fall on us any time any moment ii our life.........just to remain prepared to attend to it sensibly......A great write.......

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 June 2014

A poem full of compassion and deep feelings to save the innocent helpless winged friend. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 June 2014

A heart touching poem, very impressive, very emotional.

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Colleen Courtney 12 June 2014

Such a beautifully written but heartbreaking poem. There has to be an end to animal cruelty. It is all so unnecessary and something I feel so strongly about. I hope this poem helps to get the message across. Thanks for sharing Amitava!

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Valsa George 12 June 2014

Arrows may be sped while swimming in the air and soaring into the measureless heights of the sky! If struck, we might flop down to the ground wounded and bleeding..... Everything can be unexpected and that is life! Moving write!

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Amitava Sur

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