Bold Thoughts Comments

Bold, like its title, yes indeed. I love this poem and its clever imagery. Also the courageous sentiments expressed. Write more please? Alison

This is a re-sounding poem! Very bold like its title. I wish you could polish it again and again (with time that is) until it achieves it's final version - one suggestion - it appears to me that the poem could do without the fourth stanza - the others seem to parallel one another except for this one. Overall, I'm very impressed with the tone and structure of the poem.

crisp, clean, beautiful, memorable.

Wonderful imagery - simply stated. The sense of daring resounds - 'I have whispered your name into that space which is fear and excitement' Great poem Dorothy, Kind regards, Justine