Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Bold, Beautiful And Breathless Comments

Rating: 5.0

As captivating as the starry skies
And, the fiery galaxies yet to explore
It is the twinkle in your eyes
That my day dreams are looking for
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Marcus McKinley
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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 January 2016

Taken I am, by you, you are So bold the forces you exude in breathless awe, the universe And, in the centre of it all, is you. Beautiful diction and wonderful flow of emotions through out. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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