Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Boiling Point Comments

Rating: 4.3

Vapors are in haste
To reach the heights it can
My face won't block its way
But its vigor lapse my vision
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 September 2014

Very reflective piece bringing facts of life effectively comparing with a hot pot.......well done Salini

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2014

An interesting comparative study of life along with a hot pot, loved it the way you described.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. Loved the words..... Life is like a pot this way Sometimes volatile and pessimistic Temper that burn all its sides Lovely description of boiling point. Loved it.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 10 September 2014

A beautiful poem which such imaginations of thoughts.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2014

Great thoughts and great message.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 September 2014

lovely....so nice thank for share

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