Saturday, February 21, 2015

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Rating: 5.0

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Sometimes I am in a pub or in a discotheque
Engaging myself in that hullabaloo or in a play.
Again, the same' I ' is sitting in a grave yard alone
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Amitava Sur
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Tushar Ray 19 March 2015

An intense expression of sadness for the demise of poet's loving wife of many years in a wonderful poetic form. I felt the sadness throughout the poem and related the sadness of my mother for about 30 years after my father's demise.

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Roseann Shawiak 08 March 2015

An intense, beautiful and melancholy poem reflecting your feelings and the depth of your love for Rakhee, Amitava. You have described the loneliness and abandonment of your love so tenderly, preciously, and intently with such a saddened and bereft heart. My heart has caught you in it's embrace, through the beauty of your poem. Thank you, Amitava for a mirror of your love. RoseAnn

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 March 2015

Very poignant write with great intensity and depth of feeling really left me not unmoved......Amitavaji.......great piece

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Valsa George 24 February 2015

Very intense in feeling and emotion! I can trace your mind....still in the strangling grip of loneliness and the pain of loss! Somehow you have to learn to adjust to the reality, Amitava! Clinging on to sad memories will not do you any good! Great write!

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Alesia Leach 24 February 2015

A beautiful and sad poem. But I am left with a question - Is your love deceased?

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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