Sunday, December 4, 2005

Bohemia's Haze Comments

Rating: 5.0

How am I supposed to inspire the world
from an ageing office chair
or leave my mark for generations to ponder
while staring past the debris on my desk.
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Lori Boulard 06 December 2005

I really love this! I got so swept away with the imagery of Paris and Venice I completely forgot I was reading this at work! ! Keep dreaming...and writing.

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Declan McHenry 04 December 2005

Sheila, brilliant. How many of us do find ourselves in the position you convey so well. There are some great lines and images in there, 'dangling my thoughts in Venetian canals' is inspired. This poem has made my evening. Superb. Thank you.

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