Body Surfing Comments

I wont lie this poem makes no sense and sucks as s

A fascinating poem with superb imagery.

Chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day by PoemHunter and Team, fantastic to know that, since this poem is true enjoyable to read.5 Stars full for you (that is Top Stars here)

Congrats on POD...........

An amazing write that had me captivated bringing thoughts of Tim Winton's 'Breathe' Saved to read again. Keep on writing and surfing.

I am mesmerized by your poem, dear winner of The Modern Poem Of The Day, truly most deserving. I have enjoyed a very lot this impressive poem. CONGRATULATIONS! Most deserving!

Such a beautiful writing so impressed! !

So you go swimming. The wave looms dark, you stroke twice and are launched into fierce velocities of green. First wave of spring............//// beautiful poetic expression

Got the feeling of a sur-real part of life