Body Shock (The Joy Of On Again Off Again Chronic Pain) Comments

Such despairing images, Jeff. I know people who suffer in just this way. Some of the line breaks feel a little awkward, but that would go along with the entire idea of the piece. Since there is no punctuation, maybe delet the question marks? Just a thought. Oh, and I love the title. The Joy of On Again Off Again...yes, I can see there would be joy when the pain is gone - even if for a little while.

painful imagery Jeff. Hope you aren't putting this one up because this is your life of late.

You actually made me feel the pain.