Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Body's Vibrations Comments

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A worn out diary breathes in my chest
It carries billions of words
Yet it never wept.
The rhythm of falling rain
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Asavri Dhillon
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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2018

Hi Asavri, A worn out diary, that is breathing in one's chest.... lovely concept. And profound thoughts. Nice poem. Good to see you on ph..

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Tom Billsborough 15 September 2016

good rhythm to a fine poem. Always to look for the unchangeable.

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Yuko Onishi 03 August 2016

nice poem, loved the flow of it

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Asavri Dhillon 24 September 2016

Thank you!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 August 2016

Yet it never wept! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Asavri Dhillon 24 September 2016

Thanks sir!

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Asavri Dhillon

Asavri Dhillon

Chandigarh, India
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