Monday, May 25, 2009

Body Of My Soul Comments

Rating: 3.0

I remember days
when I sat alone
In the dark,
with savage beasts
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Nkululeko Mdudu
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Elizabeth Mpanga 10 June 2009

this poem describes me. i feel like this almost all the time. it makes me sad but yet wakens me to find and hold on to my soul beautiful and deep thanks love

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awwww...thats so sad but cute at the same time....I'm diggin the whole concept of the poem hey....Iv never read such from that angle before...especially from a male's perspective....I like it.Big ups dawg...MWAH! !

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Mhebheru Mhlongo 01 June 2009

Lol i dnt knw, it lyk she is living you and you'll never see her again all you can do is to write a letter, but she hate paper work, its need time to read, really man its confusing but well done man, and write that letter to her, althought she hate it but she'll read it.

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Nengovhela Murendeni 26 May 2009

is a sencetive poem which i feel, it deserve my total vote.well done

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Bob Blackwell 25 May 2009

You are a sensitive man, who asks questions all the time, you should stick to the Me your true Self and go with the flow of life. The significance of the numbers 12: 11: 12 you will have to enlighten me with. Poetry is good for figuring things out. Keep writing. Bob

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Nkululeko Mdudu

Nkululeko Mdudu

Queenstown/ South Africa
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