Body Needs Comments

Nicely done. Indeed thebody is weak. Thanks for sharing

a very nice poem, it's true, a body doesn't get satisfied and it is not thankful.

Its a poem on body consciousness...where body gets stimulated by mental greed body is just prey...unfortunate..manage mind..body will behave rightly...this is your message I suppose...Tenner ~ Regards ~ niv ====== Thanks for comment on my poem Invite to read and comment on my poem [read as a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’ or any … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment

i wonder what would have made this body of yours to be greedy.But all the sm, this good.