Friday, September 4, 2009

Body Language Comments

Rating: 4.5

Lying down, staring at the sky,
Their heads turn toward each other,
Their hands embrace as each finger gently slides slowly down to squeeze for that passionate hold.
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Candice Key
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Keith Hendrickson 04 September 2009

ANOTHER GREAT PIECE. WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Loved it as a whole but i really liked the way you ended this one. I mean the last 3 lines just pulled it together so well. Great writing girl i cant wait to read more.

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