Thursday, November 5, 2015

Body And Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had the privilege to over hear the conversation between body and soul.
Body said to Soul, I am mortal, made from dust,
need water, air, food and all earthly things to survive
I am flexible in shape, in size and grow with feed they provide
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Zoyza Da Vinka 15 April 2021

Great philosophical poem.. It takes us through the dilemma of this life.

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Ricky Manhatten 21 February 2019

Outstanding poem. Joy to read your philosophy on life and death.

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Shakil Ahmed 05 November 2015

i feel pity for the body and three cheers for soul, a well-composed poem with deep philosophical theme, you have presented your thoughts in a very compact way, thanks for sharing,

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Loke Kok Yee 05 November 2015

believers will search their conscience after reading your poem thanks-10

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Sanjukta Nag 05 November 2015

It's a long poem, but it never loses itself. Every line is very compact and the whole poem is well knitted. Thank God you overhear their conversation and make readers like me enriched. A very wise sharing. And rating you know... :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

Having privilege to hear conversation between body and soul is very wise and interesting in this poem. Thought provoking and emotive poem....10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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