Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Body Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tears...
silent prayers that
the heart sends.
Prayers that the mouth is too
...
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Aisha Love
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Rakesh Rampariya 08 January 2009

i like very mutch good..........

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 April 2008

the body is sedutive.............to read

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Alison Cassidy 20 April 2008

This is a well constructed poem. The repetition of a word, followed by its definition gives the reader a framework to hang on to. Your subject is a vexed one and your response to it a mature and optimistic I believe. Your name seems perfect for your compassionate nature. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Helena Alvarez 16 April 2008

This is beautiful, but deep and it touches me this will always have a place in my heart

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