Sunday, April 22, 2012

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Rating: 4.3

trough the desert plans i walk
No home to call my own
Many a face i see
But all they see is just a body
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darkness reigns
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Sandy Player 27 December 2012

I like the repetition of lines. It's very bleak too. And very true.

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The Prince Of Darkness 25 April 2012

Good poem, just fix the 2 spelling errors on line 1 and 11

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