Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Bodies Of Infinity Comments

Rating: 4.8

My body is cramping in desire
just like an epileptic fit made of fire.
This is my perfect moment with you.
This is what God meant for us two.
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Isabel Lavender
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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 August 2008

...heart-felt verses.......10...... thanks

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Ency Bearis 13 August 2008

a great verses...well expressed last couplets...wonderful write.... Ency Bearis

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'tatooed in my heart...' lol you're such an honorable writer, with such 'original' ideas...

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Adrian Esquivel-paredes 12 August 2008

Search me by my name Jacqueline Esquivel.

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Adrian Esquivel-paredes 12 August 2008

i loved ur poem the best part that i like was if we ever have to be on different continents I will just carry you in my compartment.Hey i write poems too and i want u to tell me if they r good.

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Isabel Lavender

Isabel Lavender

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