Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Bodies In Alignment Comments

Rating: 4.5

The wasp watches me
As I stare at it
Pensive with tweezers
Of academic esquire
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Kevin Patrick
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Hans Vr 07 October 2012

Wow. This is impressive work. We share the same void.... Connected through the unseen. Excellent poem

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 September 2012

A cryptic sublime wonder, impressive how u draw d analogy btw d wasp and d human! I voted it 10 points pls tel me if it shows. Cheers.

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