Bobby Comments

OUTSTANDING! JUST OUTSTANDING! ! A ten.

brilliant poem my friend..It's always such a great pleasure to read your work...it's always clever and refreshing..Thanks for sharing this piece... Always, Amberlee

This was a lovely poem...Iiked and specially liked the simplicity injected. The central idea was really good. And yes, I choose the first option, it's not your youth, but that the world was young and less full of sins and crookedness. Keep it up, best love N.D.

True everyday modest heroism. It's good to be actively kind, because people mostly wish you well but step aside whenever something's wrong. A nice poem. Warmly, Julia