Friday, August 28, 2020

Bob The Green Blob Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cruising on midnight
I saw fire in the sky
Then a spaceship landed
Like a chromium pie
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Kevin Patrick
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Mj Lemon 14 September 2020

Great verse, Kevin. Reminds me of a time eating green Jello, watching Ghost Busters....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2020

First rated friend is affectionate. Mars visit always gives a friend amazing feeling. You have seen fire in sky lying in a mode of bridge. Going for a ride absolutely very high for 8 miles your friend has witnessed the surface of Earth. A little nitrogen Champaign clears your synapsis of robots and you like to take care of its to clear the machine. Moving in space is amazing. An excellent poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 August 2020

A great imaginative write with a captivating title and compelling imagery. A wonderful read for children too. Very entertaining as if I am watching a movie, timely for this pandemic.

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Leeann Azzopardi 28 August 2020

Kevin, I thought today was going to be boring, but after reading this poem, I think this day is going to be great. Bravo! Bravo!

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