Tuesday, January 22, 2008

Boats Passing In The Night Comments

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I look for any sign,
dark pupils hope
as shades of gray appear,
blurs growing into blue,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Tiffanie Lau 22 January 2008

And did you hear the rain, each dropp a little drum to raise the spirits' soul, asleep from too much rum. This part certainly woke the poem into life. nice poem, keep penning!

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