Boats From Troubled Lands Comments

Your colofrul language is really a treat among the poem's gloomy contemplation.

We try, we fight, we survive And we have often asked ourselves why Destiny has passed us by. Excellent, Rani.I just loved your thought process.

A beautiful write Rani and full of poignant content 10 Daniel

How very true... 'Like specks of sand that wait for tides Like stars that crowd the sky And leaves that tumble from the trees We try, we fight, we survive'...........................Liked these lines the most!