Boat Of Destiny Comments

Our children, they come through us And yet God says that they are not ours Nomads of perhaps several life times Our lives for them mere stop overs........ The hard fact of life in your few lines well brought out.. keep your pen busy

excellent. A few words yet it says so much. nice touch

Realisation and acceptance both so very beautifully portrayed in this little poem.

This little poem says so much. Beautiful!