Friday, August 14, 2015

Boat Crazy. Comments

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Give me a ship that has no rudder,
that has no compass for a guide;
just give me the sea to float upon,
and white-capped waves to ride.
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dave lessard
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Lorraine Colon 18 August 2015

What could be more peaceful than floating on calm waters, staring at a star-filled sky? It seems no problem could exist under such conditions. Your poem makes it all seem so real. Just wonderful!

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Dave Lessard 18 August 2015

Thanks Lora!

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