Board Walk..... Comments

and watch the big oil ships, this makes the poem.............

Dang it all-Havent eaten yet and after readin' this piece i'm hungry as all get out. Oh well-guess i'll havta wait a little more to eat. Great write Trace! I guess when ya git bored ya go onna bored walk. Ha! Ha! Ha! Gotta gofer now. God bless all poets-MJG.

lovely work, tracey. will explore more of your work. enjoy your single mothering.

Brill Tracey. This reminds me of that song 'under the boardwalk' I'll probably be singing it all night now! x0x

cooooooollllllll poem u got here Tracey peace and love on earth **KoNi**

Boardwalk is a Poem that borders traditionalistic Prose...Quite melancholy, it takes one particular segment of the day and finely details it, but in a very relaxed and matter-of-fact manner. i like it a lot, Tracey'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

Great rite me Lady........